Poetry - the in between / a fairy tale (inverted)

[brillando]

Titles: the in between / a fairy tale (inverted)
Original text(s) erased: Limbo and the virgin queen respectively
Erased by: jetaimerai
Original text by: fatalnocturne
Fandom (of original texts): Kingdom Hearts
Fandom (of erasures): None
Notes: I erased one but it seemed too short so I erased another one! This is my first time doing erasures so I hope you enjoy them!


the in between

she floats
eyes closed
only feeling
bright lights and
beautiful things

a scream
a shout

murder, murder!

the skin chilled
silence

"It's time to go home."

we're not in Kansas anymore
where am I?
there is no light here

limbs aching
heart pounding
she runs forward and--

she wonders if she is hallucinating

she fights and
runs, runs, runs

she subsides like the waves

a young boy
blissful in his ignorance
waiting for her

happy fairy tale endings never occur


a fairy tale (inverted)

a girl
trapped by her daring prince
(in her head)
deep in the darkness

she has him, in a way
it is never enough

creeping along the shadows
he reaches her
there is blood on his sword

she fears
he hunts her

this is penance

he is
a shadow of the one she loves

Comments

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[rienestsacre.livejournal.com]

I'm sorry it took me a million years to reply to this, but wow, that is such high praise! Thank you SO much! ♥

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