Supernatural - the landing

[brillando]

Title: the landing
Original text erased: it's not the fall that kills you
Erased by: jetaimerai
Original text by: sgmajorshipper
Fandom (of original text): Supernatural
Fandom (of erasure): Supernatural
Notes: I couldn't help taking a dark story and making it darker. You've been warned...

It ends like this:

Smoke in the air
Fires burning
Deserted buildings
Abandoned

Dying like this, slowly
is different from falling

There are corpses laid out
Swords in their stomachs
The war is over

An archangel of heaven
against a mere foot solider?
Unthinkable

An angelic blade into the heart
He isn’t dead
Yet

This was the end
Regret
Dean was right

Grace flickers through the cut
Blood slipping out, sizzling

Disconnection
His mind
This body
Severed

He closed his eyes
Castiel wondered
If they would come

Pain is
Crashing in a wave
That sweeps him back to sea

It starts like this:

“There’s a way.”
Desperation
A little bit of hope

They’re going to win

Comments

[majorshipper]

Oh, wow. You've totally distilled this into the essence of it. Everything so sharp and jagged-edged and just ♥

[rienestsacre.livejournal.com]

Spoiler: my intent with this was to twist the story around so that Cas was the one who died! But, poetry is magical in that it's up to interpretation, so other interpretations are totally legit. xD Either way, I'm SO glad you liked it!! ♥

[majorshipper]

I did notice that, actually. I like. Originally, the fic was supposed to end ambiguous(well...not actually. rocks fall and every dies, more likely), but, I couldn't handle my own angst so I threw the boys in there.

[jetaimerai.livejournal.com]

Sorry, I just wanted to clarify because your comment didn't make it clear! And heee! I like that you had a happier ending, it works, but I'm a bit of a sadist you see... xD

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